Memory lane

by ~*SugarCube*~   Mar 23, 2007


Standing in the pouring rain.
Tears flowing down her delicate cheeks.
Gazing at what was once her lane.
Flash backs of her counting down the weeks.

Until she could leave that terrible place.
She couldn't wait to move far away.
She'd attempt to forget all the memories.
Though they were too hard to erase.
She didn't want to hear those painful words her mother would say.

Her touch was cold.
So was her heart.
" I hate you" is all she was told.
Everything fell apart.

Years later she got married.
Her life was great.
She let go of all the pain she once carried.
She became pregnant, she couldn't wait.

She couldn't wait to hold her little baby in her arms.
She promised she'd never leave her child's side.
She'll keep her child away from harm.
Be it's loving mother, be its guide.

Her mother was wrong.
She said she'd never make it.
But she always stayed strong.
Her mother said any guy shes with, they would just split.

Her mothers the one that's alone.
She sits at home and drinks.
No one calls her on the phone.
She sits there and thinks.

She asked herself what she did wrong.
In her rocking chair she stays wasting it all away.
drinking her life away.
She tried to reach out to her, she waited to long.
Theres nothing she can say.

Walking down memory lane
Through the window her mother stands with a smirk on her face.
She walks away, knowing now shes in a better place.

*Chelsea*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is a very sad poem, but i defiantly enjoyed reading it. it had so much emotion in it. you did a wonerful job with it. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I like this poem. i couldnt really understand it at first. but i ended up liking it! the flow was good and i liked how it rhymed every once in a while. great poem ! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow thts really sad...its sort of lik a life story..a 5/5 again ur poems r really good

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The imagery here was the best part of it. I liked that a lot. However, you made a few fequent mistakes, which put me off of it a little. For example, sometimes when writing 'she's', you didn't use an apostrophe. And other times you repeated yourself when you shouldn't have, and therefore made the flow off a little. I think your vocabulary could have been stronger.

    Anyhow, it was a nice read, and I liked the ending.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This is so sad. I loved the emotion and the way u described the feelings and thoughts. Wonderful poem. Keep it up. 5/5