This poem has very strong emotions coming out from it. its very well written and its flows nicely. great job

The flow was off in bits but it was still a good read.
I like how you write storeys in your poems.
This one was touching & I loved how the ending had a ray of hope.

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Wow, this was a really sad poem. Memories do sometimes come back to haunt us. Good job on this one!

This is so sad. I loved the emotion and the way u described the feelings and thoughts. Wonderful poem. Keep it up. 5/5

The imagery here was the best part of it. I liked that a lot. However, you made a few fequent mistakes, which put me off of it a little. For example, sometimes when writing 'she's', you didn't use an apostrophe. And other times you repeated yourself when you shouldn't have, and therefore made the flow off a little. I think your vocabulary could have been stronger.

Anyhow, it was a nice read, and I liked the ending.

Wow thts really sad...its sort of lik a life story..a 5/5 again ur poems r really good

I like this poem. i couldnt really understand it at first. but i ended up liking it! the flow was good and i liked how it rhymed every once in a while. great poem ! 5/5

Wow this is a very sad poem, but i defiantly enjoyed reading it. it had so much emotion in it. you did a wonerful job with it. 5/5

~Kristina