Comments : Is it alright?

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwi think its really good, you should try and write more xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    That was a sweet poem.. I liked it :) 5/5 keep up your writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Loved it..

  • Good poem.
    The imagery was great. And the flowed well.

    'From night skies
    tears falling into eyes
    and you smile.
    Staring back at me
    Holding me tight.
    Through the loneliness night.'

    Beautiful 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I loved the imagery, and the emtion is strong. well written, and great flow. 5/5 Sorry it took me so long to get back to you for commenting on my poems. thank you by the way. i haven't been on line in a couple of days.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem!!.....excellent imagery!...Great flow!.....Very good job!...u gotta lot of talents..wrk on it!...loved this peice!..
    an easy 5/5 frm me!
    xxPoojax

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    That was simply amazing! I like your style in writing! well penned! keep writing! I really enjoyed this one! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Awh I love it! The use of words was good. I read it twice cause I like it a lot lol XD

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Excelent, you are really a talented writer i love reading ur poems the way u write just makes the poem so perfect very good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Just three words i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    I wish i had that.= (great job this is very good writing.5/5

    Cory

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is really good, written so well, made me go awww...this is great stuff!!! again a perfect word choice!!!
    5/5
    - ali xxxxxxxxxxxx