by Baby Rainbow
Awwi think its really good, you should try and write more xxx |
That was a sweet poem.. I liked it :) 5/5 keep up your writing :) |
by moonlil
Loved it.. |
Good poem. |
by Vanessa
I loved the imagery, and the emtion is strong. well written, and great flow. 5/5 Sorry it took me so long to get back to you for commenting on my poems. thank you by the way. i haven't been on line in a couple of days. |
Beautiful poem!!.....excellent imagery!...Great flow!.....Very good job!...u gotta lot of talents..wrk on it!...loved this peice!.. |
by Marc Ortiz
That was simply amazing! I like your style in writing! well penned! keep writing! I really enjoyed this one! 5/5! |
by Sydney
Awh I love it! The use of words was good. I read it twice cause I like it a lot lol XD |
by amoxi
Excelent, you are really a talented writer i love reading ur poems the way u write just makes the poem so perfect very good job |
by Boy
Just three words i loved it |
by cory
I wish i had that.= (great job this is very good writing.5/5 |
by ali
This is really good, written so well, made me go awww...this is great stuff!!! again a perfect word choice!!! |