Water streams across my skin
Cool and clean
Erasing where i've been
And who i was.
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I love this part !
Nature poems are one of my favorite types and his one was a wonderful read.

The soft glow of a street-lamp
Rubs across the shadows-
a smeared chalk drawing
of trees and stars.
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Amazing imagery created with words!

Love every detail of it, hope to see more poems like ths one....
Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

I love rain and storms, and this is written so beautifully, it really captures perfectly that feeling of being in the rain, wonderful images and very well written.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

I should let you know, i absolutely love rain. everything about it is soothing and exciting and amusing all at the same time. much like the feeling of reading your poem. great imagery. it felt like i was there. but then i finished reading it, and BAM! back to reality.