by dollwithafrown Mar 23, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
This is my first ever Terzanelle. |
by Jenni Marie
I absolutely adore this... |
This is a greta poem with beautiful vocabulary. It's not my favorite that you've done, but it's still gorgeous. |
by Darien
Lol, the title reminded me of the movie, Vanilla Sky. Anyways, this was a really good first attempt. I know it's hard writing formed poetry, because you feel restricted, but you did a good job on this one. You also picked the best lines to be repeated. I still sort of don't understand Terzanelle, but one day I will learn! |