Great poem, keep up the talent
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This poem is beautiful & amazing! its like everytime something happens to the rose someone gets hurt or dies. amazing 10/5

To say it's a sad poem about "dying roses" I enjoyed it.
I don't normally like those topics but I guess since it had a sense of metaphor, it seemed more meaningful. I thought the most of it was very strong and well written, however the ending (last few lines) didn't do the poem justice as an ending. I guess it could just do with some more umph...
It was good though. Thanks for sharing.

I don't know why this poem wasdownvoted, i really liked it. Again the imagery was good the rhyme scheme threw me off a little but it worked really well. Another great write :)
5/5

I agree that this world is a horrible place and is only getting worse by day. It sometimes makes me wonder - whats the point of living anymore?? amazing job 5/5

Great write, from a wonderfully well rounded poet. I loved it and the way you had the rhyme scheme. Great work.

Peace, Joe

I loved the title of this one, it made me want to read it that much more. The poem wasn't what I had expected but I loved it. it spoke truth about the crumbling society we see each and every day, but one thing,... looses = loses. That was the one mistake I caught on to. Other than that, GREAT poem.

Definate 5/5 (:

A poor boy starves-left in fright.
[[This should be a double dash. Just grammatical pickyness.]]

Wow. Oh. My. God.
I thought you were one of those cliche writers and I was going to have to comment on five horrible poems, but your last three are outstanding. They have such meaning and such beauty to them! Wow. Just.. Damn.

Life and strife are very cliche rhymes...try to get away from that. I know it's hard because life doesn't rhyme with much, but, yeah.

Anyways. Beautiful. I'm nominating this for the weekly contest. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5 + Nomination