Well i think its very good so thanks for posting xxxxxx

This was a pretty good poem. You can really read the difference between your poems now, and your poems in the past. You can see how they have matured. But still, you had talent then also. That last verse is so true. So very true!..

Well i will vote too. dam ppl commenting and not voting!

i loved it. so sad and beautiful. well done. keep writing. just give me a message when you want me to comment again.

5/5 David

A great poem, i love the end:

Nobody can fix a broken heart
But the pain can be replaced
By a friend that cannot fight back

thats so true :) 5/5

I read your profile. That quote is so true. I'[m glad you pointed out and really read my poem because those other poets obviously didn't and just wanted me to comment on their poem.

I also enjoyed how much thought you put into that comment. Long comments on improvement are beter then '5/5 thats great!'

I admire you.
Honestly I didnt particularly like this poem. Only because I prefer poems that rhyme. I've decided to not vote because it would unfair on you. I'd be voting more on preference then your standard of writing.

thanks again for the comment, you're my new idol!

xxoo
*keep in touch*
- Em

I liked this, the depth and emotion behind the words are clear for all to see.
I can really tell the difference from your writing then and now, but although this is old, it's still pretty damn good!