by Independence Forever Mar 24, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
When you sit dazed and worried |
by Kaila
I'm not quite sure what this poem is about but I do think everything fit right and nicely |
I like the use of 'tidal wave' but I guess the flow seems a little off to me. Interesting way of making the couplets a little longer with each stanza though I admit the last stands out to me. It is an interesting write. |
by Black night
Good poem liked the way you used the tidal wave as the reference |