This poem has a lot of emotion but its lacking in structure and its a bit cliche ... probably about a 3/4 but i'll vote a 5 anyway :D

Nice itz kinda touchin wish i had these writin ability

Well it was another good poem, well done. Just a suggestion to use punctuations xD. flow was smooth, good job.

You are a very talented writer i love you poems alot, they are filled with meaning and life
xx keep it up

Great work 5/5