Another great poem with a lot of emotion.. my only suggestion is to add some more structure to this so its easier to find the flow

Another great poem with a lot of emotion.. my only suggestion is to add some more structure to this so its easier to find the flow

Hey thatz nice itz pretty hard 2 get over those shit but forget it lol i like it

I think you should try putting your poems not in caps lock. only it's easier to read and understand however i was able to find a nice rythm. well done xoxo

I like your style in writing. It really comes from the heart.. Your poems remind me of my ex.. Anyway just a suggestion to use punctuations ^_^