Comments : A Scarlet Letter (Invisible)

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Wow. The ending... it just sticks in my head :]

    I love it... it's really sad, but the metaphors and imagery help move it along. I like your repetition, too :)

    If you have the time, can you please read, "Self Worth"? Thank you!