Rachel
Your words ring so true! Excellent job!

Follow your heart,
It's not too late for a brand new start.
Don't just settle, I'll make a bet,
If you do you'll face regret

Love this part.
Love Aunt Cindy

We should always follow our hearts....life is too short. Nicely written and thought provoking!

Amazing poem, i love the way it flows so well. The only thing i could even think of as far as improvements go would be to mention fire and ice a bit more make some more connections. By the end i kind of lost the connection. Amazing poem btw, loved it.

The reference to fire and ice was a metaphor for two people being complete opposites.

Wow.. i could find lots of different meanings in this piece. i think this is one of my faves for some reason, lol
It's brilliant, i love the hidden meanings!
5/5
*Gem*

Rachel
How true your words are. I am so glad that I am with the one I love now. Makes such a diffrence.

Amazing write, a very strong message, if we follow our heart we never have to regret. 5/5

Take care
chavii.

This is a really good poem. nicely written. applies to me much at the moment.

Nice job, really enjoyed reading it

I like this poem and i felt as i was reading it that it was written with a true meaning behind iit...

I love it i know how you feel!

I love it keep going!

Mmmmm......

Rachel
love this message.....

Loved it!...Especially the title....