"I'll bring you rainbows and sunshine,
when skies over you are grey.
I'll be your handy tool-box,
at the end of a broken day"

That stanza was excellent. I loved the metaphor of the tool box. That was, in my opinion, one of the best lines of the whole poem.
You manages to write this without sounding to OTT, you had the right amount of emotion.
Excellent work
5/5
*Gem*

(Comment One)

I did love this poem. :]
It was flawless, the others said more that I could relate to.. I believe though.

You did an outstanding job, hun.
All your poems are outstanding.
Keep it up. :]]
5/5

I did love this poem. :]
It was flawless, the others said more that I could relate to.. I believe though.

You did an outstanding job, hun.
All your poems are outstanding.
Keep it up. :]]
5/5

Excellent poem sounds like u r not only a great poet but a great friend

Aweh, I'm sure whichever friend you wrote this for really enjoyed it. It was cute and I normally HATE friendship poems but this one was great. ^_^