Healing Love.

by chavii   Mar 24, 2007


One more scar for the heart,
the wretched soul whithers in hurt.

One more dream shattered,
the remnants disposed through tears.

One more hope murdered,
the desperation for death conquers.

One embrace of unconditional love,
life flickers back in her dead world.

--chavii--

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  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Good Heavens. In all truth, Miss Chavii, I was literally rendered speechless in a split-second. This piece was SO beautiful for words to describe, and that's with a capital S and O! :) I really, really love it. Excellent work! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care.

    One word is all I got to say about it: stupendous. =]

    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Amazing poem....beautiful and touching, flawless with great flow

    inpiring and lovly

    .-.-.-.-.lots of love.-.-.-.-.tara

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    One embrace of unconditional love,
    life flickers back in her dead world

    This is just so amazing, couple of lines and they say so much...its just so deep.

    I wonder what made this poem downvoted?

    Keep writing dear
    Sorry for being late in commenting.

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by SHAWN

    It was nice I liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by KARINA

    I like your poem it is short and yet tells alot keep up the good work

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