by Rikki Mar 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A boy and a girl laughing, |
by Ruthie
Hi gurl :) long time no comment. wow. that was really good work! you've improved so much since I last saw u! well written. keep working at it babe :) i really loved ur imagry and your word use and ur structure *Grins* .... hard story to work with and you did a really great job. hope it's not u :) |
That's so sad...unfortunately, it happens, even in our society...way to put in words what some people cannot even speak of. |
by Milton
Is this story real? I hope it's not someone you know, this guy looks like a real loser. you're real good with wiritng feelings down in your poems. good stuff =) |