This poem is oh so true. It is short and straight to the point. I can relate alot, as many people would be able to. There isn't much critique that could be written on this poem as it is so short, but everything you wrote was great. 5/5

Tammie.

Awhh, Taleee, thats so sad. I loved it though, the title was really creativee. It flowed well and I loved your descriptionsss. I missed your poetrry hunni. 5/5

Hey hun lot of emotion in this poem. havent read much of ur work in ages. very touching poem. keep em coming. xx

This poem really makes me think back on certain times. Times I sort of wish didn't happen now, but then, they were good times. Man, this one hits home hard. Good job on this one though SMWACE sis. Great to have you back!

Short & Powerful.
You manage to get very strong feelings into a poem so short. Wonderful poem about a lost relationship. Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Short...but awesome!

Nice poem, keep it up. 5/5

Short but great

Great poem

5/5. this is really nice, well its sad, but its really well written i think so anyway . keep up the good work =]

Short and sweet. i love it. i can relate to it. keep it up. i love your poetry.