Comments : The one that wasn't

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm. this is great, but the structure could be edited. the imagery words you used were baeutiful. they sounded nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherise

    I really liked the word choice you used! it was a very beautiful poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Nice poem! short and simple but full of emotion! great write 5/5 >>ANtoNiiA<<