Eternally In Love With You

Awhh this was so sweet<3 it was an amazing poem. and i can relate to it because i felt this way about a guy. actually,i still do. but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5 never stop writing!!

That was a beautiful poem! You've got great talent. The rhythem of the poem was flawless and your choice of words was perfect. Keep it up! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Wow i loved this one, this one is my favorite of the 3 i read

favorite line:
Shimmering sweat glowing upon supple skin

brittany (MD)

I don't understand why this isn't a 5.0 ... Downvoters suck. Anyways .. You did an excellent job! For only 14 you write beautifully. Again your vocab.. it's simply amazing. I liked how you put palpitations in here I never thought to see that in poetry. You did an amazing job babe I loved it! Your rhyming was perfect and you flow was too. I really loved this part:

Fading minds cling to each blissful thought
Tender lips yearn for a lover`s delicate caress
Crippling a heart in effort; her love she fought
Each piece of a broken soul, left weeping in distress..

Amazing Job!

5/5

Thats mighty deep of you! The title captures the essence of the meaning and the content is very embracing of the topic at hand. I really like this one.