That was an amazing poem, i really appreciate that you took the time to write about a topic like that. but ive never expeirienced something like that, so the only constructive critisism i can give is to just explain more about how you felt or what it was like, i think. but it was great, keep writing.

Hey - I am so srry you saw that. I feel even sorrier for the poor dog. I hope that the person who hit him/her attempted to look at the collar to see if there was an owner. I witnessed this once with a kitten, and the ahole just drove off. I stopped and picked up the kitten. It was crushed. I took it to an animal hospital where it was euthanized. The vet said it was a good thing too, because it would have come out of shock in a few hours and suffered an excruciating death. You have a kind soul girl - big hug.

This is a little diffent than your usual
poems. i like it alot. i offen wonder what i would write about if i did'nt have
a drug problem. I guest i know now
It's just the day to day stuff. but we
as poets see and write it diffent than
most people. you are a very talented
person. i enjoy reading everything you write. keep them coming
cy