So near yet so far

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 24, 2007


You are my hope
you are my inspiration
you make me hold on
when i feel like letting go

you came into my life
when i no longer cared
but then you made me see
the person i could be

you have saved my life
you have made me strong
you are the person
i have waited for this long

you are so brave
you make me proud
I'm so happy now
you have gave me a life

i wish i could be there
to know you really care
i know you'd keep me safe
i know you'd be my cure

i would feel so free
i could be the real me
we are so far apart
the distance is killing me

i cant feel you close
i fear you will go
so I'm writing this
cos i need you to know

my dream is to be with you
to see your smile for real
to know that all this pain
i no longer need to feel

dreams don't come true
they stay in my head
but without my angel
i know I'd be dead

saffie
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  • 8 years ago

    by ketaki

    Nice well written could not stop reading .....

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wonderful dedication to that perfect angel, you call friend. 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is so heartfelt and...just awesome! lol i really enjoyed the read. Its so powefull, and emotional. And i really feel what youre saying here. Nice work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I can really relate to this one, it reminds me of how i feel towards my brotherr. lovedd it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    This is such a sweet poem.... I love how you can express your feelings and make them come alive. The expressions jump off and on me. I love this a whole lot. You are an excellent poet. you inspire me to take my work to a whole new level.