Okay the flow was a tinsy bit off but the poem was very good and I can relate to it I know exactly how it feels to not wanna love someone...and I loved this poem

Yuor poem was comfusing but at the end it make sence i like it though very good hope you comment on mne..

Hey good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

This is beautifully written and i think it flowed well, a lovely piece of work. keep it up! xXx