This is a good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

Wow! That is really great! I love how you are just so fluent in your writing! I hope after a while my writing will develop out as well as yours! love ya sis! You are the best ever and I dont think you understand how i truly cherish our friendship! when you get the chance please rate and comment mine! xoxo ~Peanutt

That was really good. Keep writing. your really good.
Please comment on mine and vote.