Great idea and it is beautiful in that idea but having your reader feel that love is what youre lacking.... poetry is about hitting someones heart not someones mind

It's nto wierd about still being in love with him. When I was 16-17 I cried ov er my first love every damn night for 6 months, and then we got back together for a while. But once again he broke my heart and I had to get over him again, so I made myself think of the bad things about him. Anyway this poems is good, and its normal to feel what your feeling, just remember, if it's meant to be it will be. Everything happens for a reason. Cliche I know, but so true. <3