A Tragedy

GRAWR` . The rating for this is so low !
Okay, I agree that it isn`t you`r BEST piece, but it`s honestly pretty good to me .

You give me
Reasons to breathe,
You give me
Hope to live.
` I feel that it would sound better as :
You give a reason,
To breathe.
You give me hope,
To live.

But I don`t knwo . Don`t have to listen to me lol` .

My every piece of earth.
`I like that [:

Anyways, overall a 4/5 . wasn`t your best but still not that bad .
..__MiNDYY

This is not your best piece. There is nothing really special about this poem, it seemed really plain. You had a few good lines in there but that's not much. I shall wander off to read some more.

This is to be fixed. however, the site is having errors again, so ill have to waitt.....

This is pretty good, it wasn't perfect, the flow was kinda off and it wasn't so descriptive, but altogether it was sweet and very emotional, 4/5
luv gabriella

I liked this one I think you could've been a bit more discriptive but o well nice work