Great poem.
Keep up the good work!
5/5

~Chelsea

This is great. emotionally strong. i can relate to it. im going through something that poem is kinda talking about and this poem speaks out to me. its very well written. great job

Every poem i read of yours is really good. Cant wait to see more, so much sadness though.

Forget about him or make a love potion putting him under your spell. just kidding...but seriously.

your servant:
david

Ah. i realte to this poem like whoa. ive never been able to write it or plain describe it. this was wonderful. i get every bit of it. hang on.

5/5.

Aww... definitly my favorite poem so far.. the first stanza seems a little forced on the rhymes but other than that.. truely spectacular job.. you use a lot of description and vivid detail... nice job

Awww...
That was bittersweet to read, while sad at the same time. The flow was flawless & your word usage was great.

"I really miss you,
more then you know.
The longer we are apart,
the more my feelings grow."

^ My favorite stanza. 5/5 Keep writing!

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This was another well written poem, although I didn't feel it was one of your best. Keep up the hard work and good poetry.

Peace, Joe

Awh this reminds me of my ex-boyfriend.
i love poems that remind me of myself or of people i know..poems that i can relate to so therfore i loved this poem!

This poem is amazing. i love it! 5/5 definately! it is like you are writing from my heart, because i too miss someone dearly.

Bitter-sweet. emtionally charged, you did another excellent job. 5/5

Wow v nice with utmost feelings and great rhymes. Simply great