This is a good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

Thi is an EXCELLENT poem. it is full of emotion. great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Exquizite writing, you have such great talent and express intensive emotions through your poems. Keep it up. 5/5

Wow you are so good you really have a talent
your poems are so full of emotion i love them.. keep it up

This poem is semi-graphic and very deep.....I wish depressed people would look for healthier ways to put themselves through pain