by Daisha Mar 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
To cause pain is for what I strive, |
by xo kisses xo
Great poem! 5/5 i loved it |
I thought it was really good. You got the rhyming and the rythem to work well together so it didn't sound like you were just trying to rhyme. Great job. 5/5 |
by Kalee
Short but great poem. 5/5 |