Wow...this is definitely one of the best poems i've read today it was strong and full of emotion i really liked it! 5/5 keep it up
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*sniff sniff* that just made me cry. not a lot of poems do that. well done and please write more xxxxxxxx

This is a wonderfully sad poem. another one of your great poems. it nearly made me cry. It was beautiful. 5/5

Kalee

Wow that was really worth reading. It was definetly very powerful and touching.

I hope you are ok because you are very talented as a writer

Jochsey