by Austin Mar 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
No need to cry |
by Faded
I thought the flow was off once or twice but not too much, so it didnt make a difference to me. the stanza that u repeated was a good choice since it shows thats what this poem is mostly about. |
I absolutely loved this poem. |
by Kaila
Very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I got the message loud and clear! It was really refreshing to read a simple poem. the only stanza that I think needs work is this one |
Good poem! i really liked it.. awsome emotion.. keep writing!!! 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Hey good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx |