This is a beautifully written poem. the flow was nice. the rhyming structure was nicely done as well. this was a great poem. 5/5.

It was a well written love poem. I don't think it belonged in sad poems, still belonged in love.

There were only a couple lines where i felt the rhyming was a bit forced, thats my only criticism. The flow was fairly consistent and I really liked the descriptions used in the first stanza.

I loved the imagery this poem expressed and the emotion behind the words. Great write

"All I want to share with you
is our memories, old and new
take my hand, grab my wrist
seal our fate with a kiss."

I really liked those lines^
This was a very good poem.
Very well written. 5/5

~Chelsea

This poem is so good. so sweet. full of emotion and true feelings. i really enjoyed reading this poem. very well written. 5/5 keep up the good work

Really cute poem! Felt something sad about it but like its amazing poem :) Very well written :)
Beautifully written.

This had a beaultiful flow and rhyme scheme. twas fabulous!

the only error:

I won't leave your mind in vein

it's vain. vein is like the artery or w/e.

<3
nice job. thanks for the comment.

O and 5/5.

I think that this poems was written to be beautifully sad, I loved the emotion flowing throughout it i did find some parts to be a little forced but not enough to throw me off the poem which is great. Well done ~mel