by Nikki Mar 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Sit with me |
by Burning Angel
This is such a sweet poem |
Aww... it aws really swweet but simple it,s funny how when someone sings to you you can fall in love them or at least their voice you did a really good job |
Simple and beautiful. The structure is great and it's very fluent. I love it! |
by Syn
Great poem, good expression and good flow. i really enjoyed it. |
This is so beautifully written, I love it! In some of your lines you had you're when it should have been your. Otherwise, I love this! |