Aww thats so powerful to read, hope you are ok. great poem and dont stop writing xxxxx

This is very good writing
lots of skills
kepp it up xoxo

Wonderfully written, again deep and dark and full of strong emtions. The only problems i saw was the 6th staza, 3rd line it should be there not their, and the flow seemed forced in a couple of places, but still another well done job. Excellent writting.5/5