Wow...why hasnt anyone commented this poem!! its absolutly amazing! your a great writer uve just became added to ym favorites list email me sometime shop_queen1@hotmail.com nice job!

I can't believe you only have one comment, on this. This poem is truly amazing, the dark, deep emtion was wonderfully written and the flow was flawless. The word choice is what makes this poem so great. You did an excellent job 5/5 you really deserve it. Please keep writting, and I will keep reading.