Stranded with Hades

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 25, 2007


Crippled tears run,
Sharply down her cheeks;
The pain has returned.

Every emotion,
Every scene,
Floods her mind.

His breath
Lingers in the air,
Suffocating her.

Wild and rash,
He raises his arm;
He's ready.

Words as sour
As his breath,
Strike her.

The bruising begins,
The drops stream;
Battered and broken.

She is everything,
Everything but ready,
To suffer such hurt.

Deeper he ventures,
Beneath her skin;
A worm crawls.

Despite all screams,
All cries for help,
She is stranded.

No one hears her pleas,
He shoves them all aside,
Lust is his life.

Another victim
Torn that night;
Words hard to tell.

To mumble them aches,
To explain them twinges,
To remember them...

Is Hades and below...

The purity,
Of a delicate angel,
Vanished in minutes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    He�s ready.
    [[He's]]

    Words as sour
    As his breath,
    Strike her.
    [[I like that desciption.]]

    And I love that ending. I wasn't too interested, but interested enough to keep reading and that ending is a kicker; it's perfect.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Not what I was expecting from the title, but in the end I believe you used the analogy very well. You can really feel every word and in the end, you are that girl and that is what makes it a good poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow..i think this should b better in dark...good poem...very dark...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    OoOoO!!! I love the imagery it was just wonderful! And the wording was just so powerful I couldn't actually believe anyone could have came up with that haha! This poem was very well structured and written nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    Very powerful wording and the theme is extremely sad =( 5/5 I think its very good!

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