Wow, thats good, like the control you give yourself in that last stanza. keep writing xxxxx

Good job dorothy, you need to call me and tell me about this one, ok? you know what, I don't think he's worth it. and, me, Fredd, and Bill will always be here for you!!! Your friends love you, Aubs, don't you EVER forget that!!!! :)
Love Nana

Ya Dorothy!!! I luv it, i no EXACTLY how u feel!!!! it might b a different guy, idk, but still. most guys arnt worth your time girl. ur 2 good 4 all of them hahaha...
luv ya tons 4ever...fredd

Great job.Keep up the good work