A Plea for Help

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Mar 25, 2007


Chest feels heavy.
Lungs give way to the pressure.
Throat closes off.
Breathing ceases to exist.
The result of suffocation.

Nothingness cultivates in the pit of a stomach.
Sitting there like a rock.
Churning and turning the nausea grows.
Feeling sick with every touch.
The result of emptiness.

Head pounding with every heart beat.
Pressure building as noise rises to deafening tones.
Dizziness amounts from lights all around.
The room begins to spin on its own.
The result of bewilderment.

The soul is now lost.
The heart feels nothing.
No more breathing, no more thinking.
Nothing exists on the outside.
No one is left on the inside.

The result of complete unhappiness.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Truly enjoyable...glad I came across it while meandering through everyones poetry. With the poem you wrote the title wasnt a spoiler it was nice and engaging...made me visualize every stanza... wonderful 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Last stanza is very effective, you expressed emotions excellently. I like this poem, some lines aren't that great but all in all this one has great rhythm.
    This is my favorite stanza:

    The soul is now lost.
    The heart feels nothing.
    No more breathing, no more thinking.
    Nothing exists on the outside.
    No one is left on the inside.
    ^Very emotional, powerful, clear and descriptive.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was really the best poem of yours I have read. I'm adding this to my favorite list. I loved your explanation of the feelings you mentioned they were strong powerful truthful and sadly beautiful. I loved the darkness you created by your word choice this piece was eerie and intense also heart wrenching. Definitly amazing and breathe taking. Such great emotions. Well done keep on writing you definitly have talent. ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    I am adding you to my favorite authors list, I just keep reading your poems and I really like them a lot, rating them excellent! I am relating to them, sad to say. I am going through a lost close friendship, I know that hurt...........

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow Amie. This is really good!! Sorry it took me so long to getting around to reading some, been busy lately. Anyway. The flow is great and the darkness in this poem is great! It's wonderfully written and the emotions scream out in this poem. I'm loving it. 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

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