Midnight Massacre

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Mar 26, 2007


Storms softly thunder
An ebony of decay
Held to perfection.

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For perfection,
Not the living
Make the largest
Demands; we die
For eternity.

For perfection,
Hell speaks strongly
Over tomorrow's
Forgotten worries,
Burning ruby red.

For perfection,
Only Heaven
May speak. We must
Stand strong against
These treacherous lies.

For perfection,
Not the living,
Make the largest
Demands; we die
For eternity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    It is really an amazin poem...It is so true..I did like it..keep it up...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Loved your description of words in this poem they really gave this an extra shine. I enjoyed how you reapted the second stanzas first line throughout this! it was an interesting line. Loved the line "we die for eternity" This poem overall was really amazing. I find all your work to be beautiful and interesting! Very talented sheena!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    The ending was brilliant. I love how you said "We die for eternity" at the end and brought a succinct and fitting end to the poem. Well done. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    Exquizite! Keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    Exquizite! Keep it up. 5/5

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