It was pretty good

"burning ruby red" I absolutely love that depcition. This poem is so great because it's so abstract, yet so meaningful. amazing! 5/5

Exquizite! Keep it up. 5/5

Exquizite! Keep it up. 5/5

The ending was brilliant. I love how you said "We die for eternity" at the end and brought a succinct and fitting end to the poem. Well done. 5/5.

Loved your description of words in this poem they really gave this an extra shine. I enjoyed how you reapted the second stanzas first line throughout this! it was an interesting line. Loved the line "we die for eternity" This poem overall was really amazing. I find all your work to be beautiful and interesting! Very talented sheena!

It is really an amazin poem...It is so true..I did like it..keep it up...5/5.