Comments : Silent tears

  • 17 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    I really like this poem. good work.
    ~emS~

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Im liking it. welldone

  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Wow. That's a good poem right there. The content is very good.

    But...why on earth would you pretend to like other guys? Maybe he really likes you but is too scared to do anything about it, because he's afraid of being rejected by you...Just a thought. Obviously, I don't know if that's true, that's something you'll have to see for yourself...

    Anyway. Good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Loved it! This was one of my favourite poems I ever read! Great one. Great rhyming.. The first verse...:

    I'll say that i don't love you
    that you're just another guy
    I'll smile like nothings wrong
    you'll never know i cry

    Loved it.. That's just what I do..

    Anyway, I loved it. Great job. Keep on writing your wonderful poetry

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    SO GOOD>> I feel like that alot with Jesse and James