Effective and well-delivered..nicely rounded, too......Points well-taken....

After All..............
It Is YOUR Story, Dear...............You may at any moment begin the rewrite....(sometimes a long nap followed by a long shower and a cool face wash can really help one to move Forward..;-)

O.O I think this is one of my favorite poems. The imagery stood out and you told the story very eloquently. 5/5