by Jenni Marie Mar 26, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Running along the floor |
by Midnight Sun
Wow! This poem is SO unbelievably powerful! I mean that was just incredible. Absolutely wonderful job! I think I liked it the most because it was so to the point. There was no jumping around the subject, it was what it was. And for that, kudos to you! :) You are going in my favorites cause I really love your style! I can't wait to read more! |
by Elyse
Wow really liked it....made me wanna keep reading good job! love the ending! |
You actually had me scared for a minute lol. Again the flow was great and I loved the story behind it. Really didn't get what it was exactly about but I really enjoyed this poem I kind of made up my own story for it. Great job. 5/5 |
Wow!!! i have chills! Very well written! Flawless flow. Fantastic!! 5/5 |
by Linden
Takes away my breathe once again. |