Unacceptable mistake

by Landi Cordier   Mar 26, 2007


Did I need to make
That mistake
If it hasn't helped me grow
And if I could
I would indeed
Turn back the
Hands of time
Back to when I didn't know

Make the hourglass
Go back two years
Make me live without
These fears
Of you letting go

And up above
Where I'm going soon
Is where I can be free,
It's where I can be me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this piece.

    Make the hourglass
    Go back two years
    Make me live without
    These fears
    Of you letting go

    If only we could turn back time and redo things. Love these lines.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I really liked this poem it was dark and ambigous yet still captured a perfect image. i loved the use of hourglass and found it an exciting poem to read.

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