Comments : My Perfect Place

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrea

    That was absolutely beautiful. I love the way you can put your feelings down to let everyone know how you are feeling. I struggle with that sometimes. Please comment on my poetry as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Even when the sky is cloudy
    Still a smile upon my face
    As long as we're together
    I'm in my perfect place

    "As long as we're together". We subconsciously put conditions in our relationship. I keep saying that too.
    Another beautiful poem.