Jeannie
This is so great the imagery is so wonderful. Word choices wow! Flow perfect. Nice job!
Take Care Love Cindy

I agree with Hellon. I've heard that saying too and your poem complimented it perfectly.
The imagery was breath-taking. I honestly felt like i was there in the moonlight listening to the haunting music..
Amazing piece..
5/5
*Gem*

(I'd change that line if i could but untill the stupid site fits the edit machine thing, i can't, lol)

This is a good poem! it kind of reminds me of Shattered Mirror its a really good book and if your into that kind of stuff you should read it!

I absolutely love vampire poetry. There is something so romantic and yet taboo about it. This a beautiful description of the dance. This is by far my favorite. I probaly say that about every one of your poems but I this one beats them all. IMO your best. I would be willing to be you could co-write a vampiric tale with Anne Rice. It would be a best seller. Love love love it.
Dixie

Flirting with the darkness...i like it