Girl that is really good.. Very well worded..

Beautiful poem with a lot of feeling and depth put into it. Nice work. Hehe and you wrote it on my birthday :)
cheers, josh

Very nice poem love it such great writing keep up the great work

kristin

I LOVED this poem. Reminded me a lot of a me a few years back, which is good because a lot of people can relate to this and that is what readers want to read - something that they relate to or the poem that they are reading is not so easily understood. Great jod, =]

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