Thats very cute and a wonderful topic for a poem.
A poem a day keeps the blues away =)
Excellent idea
5/5
*Gem*

I agree with Gem.
Very unique & creative idea for a poem. Everything flowed well & overall it was amazing!
Keep it up!
5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Awww this was cool like a poem inside a poem type thing it was neat! I loved it