LOW

by naomi   Mar 26, 2007


I wish you could be here with us and see us cry
were all here feeling helpless and wondering why
i need you back before its too late
my passion has gone and no one can relate
the rules will change as soon as you leave
give me time to let myself grieve
give me time to make it through
if only i could talk to you
you would know how i feel i would be able to show
the pain i will suffer after you go
please come back and help me to grow
cause when youre not there all i feel is low

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  • 17 years ago

    by leo

    YOUR LOVED ONE IS ALWAYS HERE WITH YOU JUST SHOT YOUR EYES AND LISTEN TO YOUR HEART. THE PAIN WILL GO AWAY SOON, JUST HANG IN THERE, AND PLEASE REMEMBER LIVING YOUR IFEF HAPPILLY DOES NOT MEAN THAT YOU FORGOT, PLEASE STAY STRONG!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww, im sorry you feel this way but your poem is good. keep writing xxxx