That First Day

by HuggyQueenofCookies   Mar 26, 2007


Doesn't rhyme, still dunno what i was getting to..yes this Will be edited soon!*

Yeah, that first day
in fourth period
in old Crumpler's class was
different..
Out of twenty something
or other students in the class
you were the only one that
caught my interest completely.
you were quiet
and unless Crumps was
saying some
dumb ass
joke, you Rarely smiled...
but oh, when you did
I knew.
I just had to get you to smile
to brighten your face
and keep it there..
I tried talking to you
asking what other class
with Crumps you had
and all i got was a quiet
"I don't know."
But it didn't faze me
and I'm glad because my efforts did
pay off.
Because you soon became a friend to me
and one that i could trust
you were there
during some hard times
and well..
I'm glad..
and I love it when you smile..

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  • 17 years ago

    by anthony

    I gotta stop reading comments b4 writing my own =/ kinda took me outta tune...but luved the poem i believe =/

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...'only one who'...&...'and one who I could trust', dear.....'that' is for things, dear.....regardless of popular 'trends'...who....is for people......(and yes I do about whom but that.....is toooo technical under these conditions......

    Beyond these nitpicks, this is a lovely and well-written poem....(can't really imagine what else needs editing...of course, that's Your call..;-)....it made me feel warm...very nice...how fortunate to have a friend....like you...

    I Love it when you smile, Huggy....you make me smile too..........

    Gramma

  • 17 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    I like this one. It's cool. But who would want a name like Crumpler? lol

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