Wow i like the wording in this poem and you have it ryhming so well, its very good. keep it up xx

Wow, this is great! an intense poem that has got me guessing, dont think i understood it all but loved it neway!! woweee great work

(ps i've never heard anyone use gay like that in a poem before- good job, i always laugh wen i say it, heeeehee)

Very good piece. Strong wording. I like your thoughts.

Definitely talented.