As i wake up this day,
your the first thing on my mind,

wow,,,, it realy relates to me.. you hows the strong love... offcourse you love will never end for special person... your poem was so cute and sweet. it shows that you cannot live without someone.. your work is gr8 you have talent 5/5

This line honestly i feel this way.....

As i wake up this day,
your the first thing on my mind,
and as the days fly by,
I wanna be with you all the time.

i like it,, i can relate this poem...
god bless!

This poem was kind of blah because of the repeating so much. but it sounded like song lyrics which i liked. 4/5 good job.

Okay, I really, really loved the message in this poem, it was great. The flow was dead on and all in all, justa great write, very powerful. Keep it up.
-Ally

Good job!

Oh this ones so good. It's like a story. I really like it. You're cool dude.

5/5

*~Alex~*

Wow.. this is very meaningful.. im sure alot of people think and feel those emotions! very well done
5/5
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