by Boy
As i wake up this day, |
by Sweet lig
This line honestly i feel this way..... |
by Curry
This poem was kind of blah because of the repeating so much. but it sounded like song lyrics which i liked. 4/5 good job. |
Okay, I really, really loved the message in this poem, it was great. The flow was dead on and all in all, justa great write, very powerful. Keep it up. |
by Nikki
Good job! |
by Alex
Oh this ones so good. It's like a story. I really like it. You're cool dude. |
by Lozbi
Wow.. this is very meaningful.. im sure alot of people think and feel those emotions! very well done |